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个人陈述(PS)该如何写?



临近春节,第一批OFFER也基本已经发送了,收到Offer的喜悦,等待的心焦,还有未完成作品集小伙伴们争分夺秒的追赶,还没递交申请的小伙伴们,你们的文书材料准备好了吗?

对于申请海外院校来说,文书是和作品集同等重要的材料,一份好的文书可以让你在众多申请者中脱颖而出,让面试官有兴趣花时间了解你的作品,好的文书+作品集,甚至会让你被免面试录取。

外境做为专业专注于作品集培训的教育机构,几年斩获颇丰,申请本科的学生,90%拿到了伦艺的面试邀请或者免面试直接录取,制胜法宝除了高水平的作品集以外,就是在个人陈述方面,有很深的心得体会,个人陈述,也就是Personal statement 在申请中占有举足轻重的地位,那我们该如何写呢?



01
PART

个人陈述首先要有自我推荐和自我展示的环节

个人陈述也就是PS是让考官通过文字的表达,对你有一个直观而清晰的认识,因此PS尽量不要写一些假而空的描述,而是要通过具体的事情,让考官对你有一个理性而客观的评析,越具体越好,能够展现你的兴趣爱好、热爱程度、处世态度,展现出积极乐观的态度。


02
PART

个人陈述要展现真实性

个人陈述切记千万不要抄袭,也不要请人代写,对于欧美国家来说,诚信是立足之本,七拼八凑、自造华丽的个人陈述,洋洋洒洒,打动的也许只是你自己,面试官们经验丰富、火眼金睛,在面试阶段,假的个人陈述很容易被拆穿,导致你最终被拒。


03
PART

个人陈述要简洁明了、逻辑清晰、循序渐进

个人陈述篇幅有限,一般500字左右,在这样有限的文字里浓缩你的人生,要求我们要挑跟你专业有关的重点,展现出你对所学专业的热爱甚至痴迷,让考官感受到你的思维清晰,逻辑缜密,让考官对你产生惺惺相惜的感觉,PS就成功了。


04
PART

通过个人陈述展现你的生活态度和个人魅力

考官们希望看学生是积极的、上进的,同时也是乐在其中的,这些态度最好通过具体的事情让考官感受到,而不是通过没有说服力的词语来强调。同时个人陈述也可以展示你的人格魅力和行事风格,让考官通过文字可以多角度、多维度的认识你,让你的形象鲜活的留在考官的印象里。



下面我们来看看一些院校对于PS的要求:


皇艺官网对PS的要求


伦艺官网对PS的要求


格拉斯哥官网对PS的要求


那么一篇成功的PS是怎样的呢?

以下面这篇为例来分析:





Personal Statement



My name is. I want to apply for LCC CertHE Preparation for Design, Media and Screen. I began to learn about film and television since the first year of high school. But it was till the senior three that I had a deep understanding of this field and desired to take it as a major. In the art course, I participated in the recording of TV programs and was completely attracted when the live director introduced various equipment and workflows, which made me realize that is my interest. Art cannot be clearly divided according to the type, and it is intermingled. This is especially true for film, existing as the seventh art. A good film and TV producer must be all-around. multi-faceted, including but not limed to audio-visual capabilities. I love reading and literature and these readings will be of great help to my future creative learning.

In UK, variety shows includes almost all events of the hot news, smearing and reassembling them. Entertainment programs are a little deeper than the news but shallower than philosophy. Everyone wants to win the lottery and become a millionaire, so they have "Millionaire" and "Millions of pounds fall". Ordinary people would like to be celebrities so there is "X Factor.". I have seen an interview in which the British director Malcolm Clarke expressed his opinions on Chinese film and television. He remarked, “When I look at Chinese TV works, I find that many stories are floating on the surface. The questions are not deep enough.” To be honest, many Chinese films have some degree of preaching, hard to impress people. Therefore, when Westerners see China’s political propaganda film, they will turn it off. Teaching propaganda is by no means the right way to tell stories. If I were asked to give the Chinese media a small suggestion, I would suggest to talk more about the story of the characters and less about the achievements of technological development. I personally think most of the people occupying the mainstream cultural position in China are not proud of Chinese culture. The story is often of Chinese-style but Western-style logic. Whether it is film, television, or cultural creation, people tend to be interested in telling Chinese stories, blind and exclusive, and are reluctant to use a "Western" (marketization) way to tell stories. In the end, it is not coming, not on both sides. So, I want to learn more in the UK and get a deeper understanding of the Western way.

LCC offers the Specialist Studies: Screen where I can learn through the mode of theory-practice-project and understand the theory and history related. I have done two short videos. One is in the form of question and answer, the other is my understanding of “Maugham's Moon and Six Pence”. The facilities at college also attracts me where I can do editing and photographic practice. In the final year, I can do my desired project. Since there are still many shortcomings in China's variety show, such as over-emphasizing the stars, paying too much attention to the form and lacking innovation and creativity. I would like to be a variety director and create a show which meet the fan economy and the diversification of market demand. I look forward to starting my professional journey in UAL.


首先:一篇好的自述,要对专业技能和知识进行描述,避开劣势,突出优势,可以有一定程度的自我肯定;

第二:一篇好的自述,要重点明确,挑选对你影响深远又有趣的事情来着重描述;



第三:为使形象丰满,可以介绍一下你的兴趣爱好\业余生活、志愿者经历等,也可以写你对生活的规划;

第四:可以多个角度、多种方式丰富你的个人形象,但是切忌编造和抄袭。

第五:不用想着用专业丰富的词汇和晦涩难懂的句子妄图证明自己的英语水平,这不是作文考试,如果你没有完全掌握高难的英语水平,切勿使用,除非你想要在面试时被考官问到哑口无言。

第六:在写作上,应该注意要易于阅读,避免繁复的句式和拗口的词汇,保持一种对话感,逻辑简明干净。你的个人陈述是可以让考官能喝着下午茶,悠闲的阅读,而不是审阅卷子的似的,不停挑错。


简单来说,通过个人陈述,院校考官希望看到的是学生的成功潜力,他们不是要寻找完美掌握一切的“专家”,而是希望找到愿意努力学习的学生。



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